高三短文改错练与析九篇

作者：李景莉

1

New York, London, Paris and other big city are nice and 1. ________

excited places to live in. There are many interesting things 2. ________

to see and to do them. You can go to various kinds of museums 3. ________

and place of interest. You can also go to the theatre and 4. ________

do some shopping. But there are lot of problems, too. 5. ________

There are too many people and the cost of living is low. 6. ________

Every year people move to big cities to find jobs and study 7. ________

at good colleges. But sometimes their wishes won't come true. 8. ________

Also, too many people make that hard to keep cities safe and 9. ________

clean. So think about the problems after you move to big cities. 10. ________

[答案与简析]

1. city → cities。cities前面有other修饰, 表示泛指, 应该用名词的复数形式。2. excited → exciting。excited意为"兴奋的；激动的"；exciting意为"使人兴奋的；激动人心的"。 3. 去掉them。此处的动词不定式在句子中作定语，动词不定式与所修饰的名词有逻辑动宾关系，故them是多余的词。4. place → places。旅游胜地不止一处，故place应用复数。

5. lot → lots或lot前面加a。a lot of和lots of都是固定短语，意为"许多"。 6. low → high。根据上下文，此处应该表示"生活费用高"。 7. and → or。此处表示选择关系。 8. 本行无错。 9. that → it。it在句子中作形式宾语，真正的宾语是动词不定式。 10. after → before。 根据上文可知，作者是在劝告人们，在搬入大城市以前要考虑以下这些问题，即：人多、生活费用高、找工作难，等等。

2

Here are two types of cars may some day take 1. ________

a place of today's big cars. If everyone drives such 2. ________

cars in the future, there will be little pollution in 3. ________

the air. There will also be more space for parking 4. ________

cars in cities, and the street will be less crowded. 5. ________

Three such cars can be fit in the space now needed 6. ________

by one car of the usual size. The little cars will spend 7. ________

much less to own and drive. Drive will be safer, too, 8. ________

though these little cars can go only 65 kilometers per 9. ________

hour. But they will not be any use for long trips. 10. ________

[答案与简析]

1. may前加that / which。这是由关系代词that或which引导的定语从句，关系代词在从句中作主语。 2. a→the。take the place of是固定短语，意为"代替"。3. little→less。根据语义，此处表示未来的汽车比现在的汽车造成的空气污染少。另外，下句中的more space和less crowded也是很好的提示。4. 本行无错。5. street→streets。此处表示不止一条街道，所以，street应该用复数形式。6. 去掉be。此处的fit是动词，应该去掉be

7. spend→cost。spend的主语常指人，cost的主语常指物。8. Drive→Driving。此处是动名词作主语。 9. though→as / because。此处表示因果关系，而非让步关系。10. any前加of。这是固定句型，be of any use相当于be any useful。

3

Dear Elli，

May I ask you two questions? As a senior student, I like make 1． ________

friends with people and I do my best to get on well to everyone． 2． ________

But last week I found that one of my friend said 3． ________

to others that she hated me． She didn't want 4． ________

to be my friend any way． Now she has started 5． ________

making fun of me because of I'm fat．I am kind 6． ________

to her but why can't she be friend towards me？ 7． ________

The other question is how lose weight． Do I have 8． ________

to do more exercise？ Use pills？ And do you know any other 9． ________

better way？Would you please give me some advices． 10． ________

Yours，

Mary

[答案与简析]

1． make→making或在make前加to。like后可用动名词或动词不定式作宾语，此处没有差别。 2． 第二个to→ with。get on well with是固定词组，意为"与......相处得好"。3． friend→friends。one of后面的名词应该用复数形式，表示"......之一"。 4．本行无错。 5． way→more。not any more是固定短语，意为"不再"。6． 去掉第二个of 。此处是because引导的原因状语从句，而because of后面接名词性短语。7． friend→friendly。这里应该用形容词作表语，friendly意为"友好的"。 8． how后面加to。此处是"疑问词+动词不定式"作表语。 9． And→Or。此处表选择关系。 10． advices→advice。advice在此处是不可数名词，没有复数形式。

4

While visiting France, we decide to do some shopping. 1. ________

Not far the hotel there was a shop with all kinds 2. ________

of clothing hang up. When we went into the shop, 3. ________

a woman came up and asked that she could help us, 4. ________

so we said that we would like to look around by ourselves. 5. ________

She looked at us rather strange. Not having found 6. ________

anything we need, we thanked the woman and 7. ________

left. Suddenly my husband started to laugh, 8. ________

pointing to a small sign, which reading in English: 9. ________

"DRY-CLEANING SHOP. Please smoke here." 10. ________

[答案与简析]

1． decide→decided。由下文可知，参观法国是过去的行为，应该用动词的一般过去式。2． the前加from。far from是固定词组，意为"离......远"。 3． hang→hanging。with all kinds of clothing hanging up构成"with+名词+现在分词"的独立主格结构。4． that→if / whether。根据语义，此处应该用表示"是否"的连词。5． 去掉so。当一位女士走上前问能否帮助我们做点什么时，我们说我们只想自己四处看看。此句是when引导的时间状语从句，主句前不应该再用连词so。 6． strange→strangely。应该用副词strangely修饰动词looked。7． need→needed。 此处的need是实义动词，应该用其过去式。 8． 本行无错。 9． reading→read。过去式read是定语从句中的谓语动词。 10． smoke前面加don't。根据常识，干洗店内是不允许吸烟的。

5

With the rapid development of society, great changes have been 1. ________

taken place in family life. Many years ago, people considered them 2. ________

rich to own radios, sewing machines and watches. Most people live in 3. ________

crowded houses. When they went out, they had to walk and go by bike. 4. ________

Nowadays, life is more better than it was in the past. Many ordinary 5. ________

families have color TV sets, washing machine, mobile phones and 6. ________

the other modern equipment. People can often go traveling by train or 7. ________

plane and some even car. You can see high buildings everywhere. 8. ________

The rich prefers to buy a flat far from the busy city. 9. ________

No one can imagine what a great change we will have. 10. ________

[答案与简析]

1. 去掉been。take place意为"发生"，属不及物动词，不能用于被动语态。 2. them→it。consider作"认为"解，it作形式宾语，动词不定式作真正的宾语。

3. live→lived。由上下文可知，此处指过去，应该用一般过去时态。 4. and→or。过去人们出行，或者步行，或者骑自行车。此处表示选择关系。5. more→much。much用来修饰形容词的比较级，表示"......得多"。6. machine→machines。由本句语义可知，此处的名词应该用复数形式。 7. 去掉the。此处的other modern equipment表示泛指，如加上冠词，则表示特指。 8. car前加by。本行and的作用是连接一个句子，省略了谓语部分，但此处的by不能省略，否则，语义表达不清。9. prefers→prefer。rich, poor, old, young, wounded, disabled等形容词前加定冠词时，表示一类人，作主语时，谓语动词应该用复数形式。10. 本行无错。

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Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I had only skied for four days1. ________

in my whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother 2. ________

Victor did well in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. 3. ________

When Victor got straight A's, Dad said, "I promised a special holiday. 4. ________

I think I should keep my words." Victor's dream was to see real 5. ________

snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation, and then took 6. ________

a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw 7. ________

some snow on the trees. We began to play snow! No one in my 8. ________

family had ever touched snow before. We were all like the little children. 9. ________

We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at each other. 10. ________

[答案与简析]

1. had→have。主句谓语动词是一般现在时态，所以，状语从句的谓语动词应该是现在完成时态，不可能是过去完成时态。 2. because→ if。在that引导的宾语从句中，又包含一个条件状语从句。在爸爸许诺时，考试还没进行，所以，应该用if引导条件状语从句。3. bring→take。此处的take表示"带我们去"，不能用bring。4. 本行无错。5. words→word。keep one's word是固定词组，意为"遵守诺言"。6. at→for。for Christmas vacation意为"去度圣诞假期"。7. climb→climbed。应该用动词的一般过去时态。8. play后面加with。play with snow意为"玩雪"。

9. 去掉the。little children表示泛指，其前面不用定冠词。10. 第二个it→them。此处的them指的是snowballs，而不是snow。

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Attention, please, everyone. I have an announcement to take. 1. ________

We will pay a visit the museum on October 1st. 2. ________

I think you'll be interesting in it. In the course of the visit 3. ________

the guide will give us an account of the past or the development 4. ________

of our city. She will say something about the advancing workers, 5. ________

including some teacher. We will see many pictures there. 6. ________

I'm sure of that we can learn a lot. After the visit, we'll 7. ________

have a discussion in group and each of us should write a 8. ________

composition. We are to start out at 7:00 correctly. We should 9. ________

gather on time at our school gate. Thank you. 10. ________

[答案与简析]

1. take→make。 have an announcement to make是固定搭配，意为"发表通知"。2. visit后面加to。此处的visit是名词，pay a visit to the museum意为"参观博物馆"。 3. interesting→interested。be interested in意为"对......感兴趣"，其主语常是人。 4. or→and。由上下文可知，导游既介绍了城市的历史，又介绍了城市的发展。所以，应该使用并列连词and。5. advancing→advanced。表示"先进工作

者"时，应该用过去分词作定语。

6. teacher→teachers。根据语义，此处的名词应该用复数形式。7. 去掉of。 be sure of后面常接名词、代词或动名词；此处的sure后接从句，则去掉of。8. group→groups。 in groups是固定短语，意为"分组地"。 9. correctly→sharp。表示"准时地"，用副词sharp。10. 本行无错。

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Dear classmates,

Now I'd like to tell you why I learn English. I often read 1. ________

English loudly and try to learn something important by 2. ________

heart, which help me remember it easily and form the 3. ________

good habit of thinking in English. I listen to a lot and talk 4. ________

with others in English. In this way, I am improved my 5. ________

speaking English. I keep a diary in English every day，so 6. ________

my written English is becoming better and better. I also try my 7. ________

best to master some necessary grammar. By this mean, I can 8. ________

express me in English correctly. That's the way I have been 9. ________

learning English. I hope it will useful to you. Thank you. 10. ________

[答案与简析]

1. why→how。下文讲的是学习英语的方法，而不是学习英语的原因，故用how引导宾语从句。2. loudly→aloud。read aloud是固定搭配，意为"朗读"。

3. help→helps。which引导非限制性定语从句，修饰前面整个主句。所以，从句中的动词应该用单数形式。 4. 去掉to。a lot作listen的状语，不需要to；listen to构成固定搭配时，其后面应该有宾语。

5. am→have。此处应该用动词的现在完成时态。6. speaking→spoken。spoken English意为"英语口语"。7. 本行无错。 8. mean → means。means意为"方法；手段"，单复数形式相同。9. me→myself。express oneself是固定搭配，意为"表达自己的意思"。 10. will后面加be。句子的谓语动词不完整，形容词useful前面应该有动词be。

9

A man with two badly burned ear went to see 1. ________

his doctor. "What has happened on you?"asked the 2. ________

doctor. "Well, my wife is ironing while 3. ________

I was watching a ball game on TV. She put the 4. ________

hot iron near the telephone then my phone 5. ________

rang. I called the iron instead of the phone." 6. ________

The doctor nodded with a shrug of his shoulders. "But what did 7. ________

happened to other ear?" The man said, "Hardly had 8. ________

I hanged up when the same person called up 9. ________

again." The doctor can't help laughing when he heard this. 10. ________

[答案与简析]

1. ear→ears。由下文可知，这位男士的两只耳朵都烫伤了，故该名词用复数形式。2. on→to。 happen to sb.是固定短语，意为"某人发生了某事"。3. is→was。动词的过去进行时态表示熨衣服的动作当时正在进行。4. 本行无错。5. then→when。when表示动作的突然性，意为"正在这时"。 6. called→answered。表示"接电话"时，动词用answer, 而不用call。7. 去掉did。医生问另一只耳朵又发生了什么事，疑问词作主语，用陈述语序即可。 8. other前加the。表示两者之中的另一个时，用the other。9 . hanged→hung。表示"挂断电话"时，hang的过去式是hung。 10. can't→couldn't。全文时态一致，应该用一般过去时态。